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BREAD GOOD

I have the engine (in progress). you want to do the graphics?

Actually, you know what. better wait till I'm done.

BREAD GOOD!

Carbonwater responds:

Sounds like a plan.

Send me a message when you're done and i'll see what I can do.

Little Secret

Let me give ya a little secret. On you buttons, They have a frame known as "Hit". Make a square that covers the Button area, and the cursor can hit the button without the tedious lineing up with the letters.

Nate-Pyrokai responds:

Yea... err... your right XD;

I'll fix that and reupload. I was supposed to do that but I got so ahead of myself after finishing I forgot.

Thanks for the 7 =)

Find yourself a spellchecker

Find a spellchecker. It will help you in the long run

course, now that I've said that, I'll misspell something and eat crow.
Short, sweet, didn't end like I thought it would

theSSC responds:

alright then.

Messy ending.

There are two things I haven't figured out yet.

#1: If the main character is sitting on the left side of the truck cab (Viewer's right), and there is a guy on the right of him (Viewer's left), why does he get out on the right hand side of the truck? Wouldn't he get out on the left?

#2: There were no clouds in the sky when the guy gets home, or when he enters the house & walks up the stairs (I think, I remember seeing the sun). why is it storming when he gets in his room (and a nasty storm at that)?

Otherwise, it's alright. I don't agree with suicide though.

Jimp responds:

...lol.

Seriosuly you are thinking too hard.. who cares he gets out the wrong side of the van? :s

well....

yep... random. Good Work

Random...... I should give it a random score:
6.493072357 ok?

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

k

Always.... Smile....ing

The one problem I had with this was, the main character always kept the same facial expression, even when he was getting beat up, attacked, thrown, etc. Always the same. It needed detail. it needed more emotion.

Otherwise, not bad. The movement was blocky feeling, but not bad

Jesse-Ray responds:

It was to make it more comical but I guess it didn't work. Thanks for watching.

Vote 5

I really didn't get it. I commend you on your graphical skills, but humor wise, it needs work. Usually, when you do a flash, unless you're making a parody, it's not wise to steal others gags. The computer voice didn't bother me, but you can't really express emotion through them.

Oh, and dump the credits music. It didn't fit at all with your flash.

FlashlightClock responds:

Fair enough

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