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hmm

Not Bad. There were a few here and there dead giveaways (the squishing of the lizard), but all in all, a very nice work. Still, I can't help but feel like that explorer guy was a leprachan. I couldn't help but think that any minute now, he'd say "Everybody's after me Lucky Charms".

Find yourself a spellchecker

Find a spellchecker. It will help you in the long run

course, now that I've said that, I'll misspell something and eat crow.
Short, sweet, didn't end like I thought it would

theSSC responds:

alright then.

I think

I think she'll love it.

Nice work :)

Messy ending.

There are two things I haven't figured out yet.

#1: If the main character is sitting on the left side of the truck cab (Viewer's right), and there is a guy on the right of him (Viewer's left), why does he get out on the right hand side of the truck? Wouldn't he get out on the left?

#2: There were no clouds in the sky when the guy gets home, or when he enters the house & walks up the stairs (I think, I remember seeing the sun). why is it storming when he gets in his room (and a nasty storm at that)?

Otherwise, it's alright. I don't agree with suicide though.

Jimp responds:

...lol.

Seriosuly you are thinking too hard.. who cares he gets out the wrong side of the van? :s

lets be honest

Well, I gotta be honest, that wasn't ADHD. ADHD people do not confuse trees with sex objects. ADHD people really don't act like that.

Now Mario on drugs, that might be a better option

Now Kirk/Vader, that would have been epic

You do realize that Vader would have simply deflected the blast back at Picard with his saber, right?

Drew nicely. Wish I had that talent

well....

yep... random. Good Work

Random...... I should give it a random score:
6.493072357 ok?

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

k

Flash 5 eh?

The loosing sync seems to occur for me as well, and I wonder if it's Flash 5 ( i saw you used it ).

Not bad. Dry in places, but not bad

Always.... Smile....ing

The one problem I had with this was, the main character always kept the same facial expression, even when he was getting beat up, attacked, thrown, etc. Always the same. It needed detail. it needed more emotion.

Otherwise, not bad. The movement was blocky feeling, but not bad

Jesse-Ray responds:

It was to make it more comical but I guess it didn't work. Thanks for watching.

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I'm not going to count any off for the grammer, because I assume it's not your native language. However, you may want to find someone willing to correct it for you. Text runs a bit fast, and you may want to add a "next" button during written parts, so that we can read it at our speed. Also, learn what the "hit" button option is. Your text "Play" will be easier to click if you give it a Hit area.

Otherwise, Great work on this, the animation was very very good.

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